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Oh with the second chapter bit I have two comments. When John and Sherlock leave the morgue and John says “thank you,” I think mentioning who he’s saying it to will be nice (like thanks sherlock for telling me or thanks molly for coming in and telling us about the bodies) and second is I think there should be a little more info between sherlock says john would look too military otherwise and john tripping over the coffee table. Did the statement make him stumble or was it the outfit??? Mystery~

The thank you was for molly, i can add that in. As for tripping over the coffee table it was due to John trying to get away from crazy man with the hair gel.

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Chapter 2 of my casefic is up.

The Value of an Omega

Not sure how often I’ll be updating. i’m not very good at operating on a schedule, but i’ll probably be posting pretty quick as i’m a fast writer.