{"id":282758,"date":"2018-09-27T14:20:44","date_gmt":"2018-09-27T14:20:44","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.merindab.com\/private\/2018\/09\/27\/theredheadinquestion-green-violin-bow\/"},"modified":"2018-09-27T14:20:44","modified_gmt":"2018-09-27T14:20:44","slug":"theredheadinquestion-green-violin-bow","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.merindab.com\/private\/2018\/09\/27\/theredheadinquestion-green-violin-bow\/","title":{"rendered":""},"content":{"rendered":"

theredheadinquestion<\/a>:<\/p>\n

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green-violin-bow<\/a>:<\/p>\n

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azriona<\/a>:<\/p>\n

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thinking about the sexy bits of a pwp fic before I write it:<\/b> ehehe nice<\/p>\n

writing the sexy bits in the first draft:<\/b> this is so hot, yessss<\/p>\n

writing every part of the fic that isn\u2019t the sexy bits:<\/b> why does this take twice as long as the rest of the fic put together every single time<\/p>\n

editing my pwp:<\/b> I already used \u201cthrusting\u201d in this part of the scene. Have I accounted for everyone\u2019s limbs? Will my readers be able to accurately visualize this? How many synonyms are there for \u201cslick\u201d? Why is there no good word for nipples? Is this the same as every other sex scene I\u2019ve ever written? Why are my tenses all over the places? Should this be a comma or a semicolon or a period? Is this sentence too long? Is it possible to get rid of more filter words? What about passive voice? Whose POV is this? IS THIS EVEN HOT ANYMORE???<\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n

please\u2026another word for nipples\u2026someone<\/p>\n

not \u2018nubs\u2019<\/p>\n

please not \u2018nubs\u2019<\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n

How about \u201cfaux sippy cups\u201d\u2026<\/p>\n

\ud83d\ude01\ud83d\ude01\ud83d\ude01<\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n

That’s when I hand it off to a friend and go “is this even hot? I can’t tell anymore”<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

theredheadinquestion: green-violin-bow: azriona: thinking about the sexy bits of a pwp fic before I write it: ehehe nice writing the sexy bits in the first draft: this is so hot, yessss writing every part of the fic that isn\u2019t the sexy bits: why does this take twice as long as the rest of the fic … <\/p>\n

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